deaths embrace

i wrote this when i was depressed sorry bout the grammer






so depraved wraped encased ,cant breath, gonna suffocate, break these chains that bind escape the cluster fucked mind. drive it stait. see were it gose. Retreat. this is how it is. cant be helped , just a desperat gift
deaths realeas cant take no more help me out cant take this pain as the quiverering hands hold the gun i release the grip of death takes hold no bullshit at all this is how it is cant be changed

were you trying to say wrapped or raped? it seemed pretty chaotic and stuff... but its nice that you let all that out, keep it up!

it was wrapped

good stuff! i'm not too good at putting what i think into words, so i really like poetry from other people! unless it's cheesy and romantic...

hahaha lol

spyder_akillias wrote:

i wrote this when i was depressed sorry bout the grammer






so depraved wraped encased ,cant breath, gonna suffocate, break these chains that bind escape the cluster fucked mind. drive it stait. see were it gose. Retreat. this is how it is. cant be helped , just a desperat gift
deaths realeas cant take no more help me out cant take this pain as the quiverering hands hold the gun i release the grip of death takes hold no bullshit at all this is how it is cant be changed

Grammar*
Wrapped*
Goes*
Release*
Quivering*

D- See me after class

and Straight so it now = fail

spyder_akillias wrote:

and Straight so it now = fail

That made no sense at all