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PostSubject: deaths embrace   Sat Aug 09, 2008 2:57 am

i wrote this when i was depressed sorry bout the grammer






so depraved wraped encased ,cant breath, gonna suffocate, break these chains that bind escape the cluster fucked mind. drive it stait. see were it gose. Retreat. this is how it is. cant be helped , just a desperat gift
deaths realeas cant take no more help me out cant take this pain as the quiverering hands hold the gun i release the grip of death takes hold no bullshit at all this is how it is cant be changed
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PostSubject: SUOP   Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:33 am

were you trying to say wrapped or raped? it seemed pretty chaotic and stuff... but its nice that you let all that out, keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: deaths embrace   Thu Aug 21, 2008 4:58 am

it was wrapped
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PostSubject: Re: deaths embrace   Sun Aug 31, 2008 1:56 pm

good stuff! i'm not too good at putting what i think into words, so i really like poetry from other people! unless it's cheesy and romantic...
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PostSubject: Re: deaths embrace   Wed Sep 03, 2008 12:38 am

hahaha lol
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PostSubject: Re: deaths embrace   Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:09 pm

spyder_akillias wrote:
i wrote this when i was depressed sorry bout the grammer






so depraved wraped encased ,cant breath, gonna suffocate, break these chains that bind escape the cluster fucked mind. drive it stait. see were it gose. Retreat. this is how it is. cant be helped , just a desperat gift
deaths realeas cant take no more help me out cant take this pain as the quiverering hands hold the gun i release the grip of death takes hold no bullshit at all this is how it is cant be changed
Grammar*
Wrapped*
Goes*
Release*
Quivering*

D- See me after class
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PostSubject: Re: deaths embrace   Sat Nov 01, 2008 7:25 am

and Straight so it now = fail
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PostSubject: Re: deaths embrace   Sat Nov 01, 2008 8:49 am

spyder_akillias wrote:
and Straight so it now = fail
That made no sense at all :1
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